The Omniblight are a hunted race, older than ever. Their leader, Stray, finds herself thrust into a war of morals and self that was much older than her that threatens to take over the Galactic Realms, and it's up to her to defeat the Blighted and restore peace to the Galaxy
interested to learn more about the Omniblight :D
matt
Chapter 2 will be an origin story for the Omniblight and the Blighted sure… I got some critical feedback on the character sheet for the Omnibalance that I posted that is… telling. So, yeah, I've started the next chapter… now!
creape_art
Omniblight, Omnibalance and The Blighted, three names so far (plus the unnamed ship seller and the persona core). So with these characters we already run into an issue, who are the Omniblight? In the first entry we were introduced to the Omnibalance and The Blighted, where did Omniblight come from? was this just a continuity error or is Omniblight another race that is also hunted?...
freaky_deaky
I love it, I truly do, it has so much potential! The writing style and punctuation is a bit jarring, but overall it isn't adjective hell like lovecraft, even if some of the wording is questionable in places, i'll still be right here reading it either way. \^o^/
freaky_deaky
@freaky_deaky as I mentioned in my reply to Matt below, I heard you, and decided to make the second chapter a origin story.
creape_art
@creape_art Okay, sorry. I will not bother you again.
freaky_deaky
@freaky_deaky no, no, I'm not bothered by it! It's feedback, and I do appreciate it! I mentioned that just in case you didn't read my reply to matt!
creape_art